Reviews For Shrunk By... Your Female Boss
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Date: May 28 2018 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
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Date: May 28 2018 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Barry is obviously a back-stabbing, brown-nosing, corporate-climbing little gossip all too eager to get ahead.
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Never trust a Barry. They may seem nice but Their. Pure. Evil
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2018 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
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Date: May 26 2018 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Don't use "You" for the reader. That's so unprofessional and almost lazy. Invent a character for "You".
Author's Response:
Thank you but this was orignanlly from a madlib i made. Ment for a single reader to place themself in.
If it was an actual story i made, then i wouldnt be using you.
Thank you for the input though