[Report This]Date: November 17 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Hmm. Getting all the coins doesn't seem that bad. The guy just got distracted by her tits. The tiny guys suffered a worse fate. If I got all the coins, I would wrestle her. Wouldn't mind getting entangled with her.
Oddy? This must be a nickname. I'm trying to picture this leader named Oddy. Hmm. Maybe it's just the name Deziree gave him. They seem to have a lot of history together. She seems to sort of respect him.
Now I'm curious. What did she do with Eddy for hours? I really want to know. It sounded sexual, the way she said it.
I agree with Sebastian, this is one long fight. I'm ready for what's next in this story.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
They all kind of have history I would say. In the next chapter you get a taste of what's actually going on.
Date: November 16 2017 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Assuming what they do, I was wondering about someone, just one guy getting all the size coins to go toe to toe with her. Now I guess I'd be the one to make that rookie mistake. The handheld and toss of tinies is nice. Surprized there aren't more stories where a woman juggles tinies or plays hacky-sack with one {or perhaps a few tied up in a small balled up net like soup greens}.
I like how you worked that "you'll wake up just in time..." in there. Sounds like maybe, just maybe Deziree keeps her playtoys alive afterall.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! It gets me motivated to write faster because I really want to discuss my concept with someone. Probably 1 or 2 more chapters before anything is thoroughly explained.