[Report This]Date: October 18 2023 3:03 PM Title: Twinkies Palace of Pain ~ 2
Read through the whole thing over the weekend, and this story is amazing!! Would love to see a sequel focusing on some of the other characters, or if Maxine took her new business worldwide. Would give this a 100/10 if possible
[Report This]Date: July 25 2017 12:22 PM Title: Twinkies Palace of Pain ~ 2
So Twinkie and Twilia are the same person? I guess she has two sides to her. :)
Twinkie seems like a fun woman to be around. Amy is sexy, Maxine is controlling, Melanie is a mistress, Angela is the sweet one, and Suzie has yet to be discovered.
The 4 winners get to polish her shoes, and the last one has to pleasure the lady? Ha! I will be last all the time then! It's not even that bad. Twinkie doesn't even drop him in her panties. And this is her punishment! These guys should be lucky.
If this was Amy, full timeout in her panties for a day would be the punishment. Twinkie is great for tinies who are training to get used to this universe. They would have nightmares about a woman like Amy. Man, I miss her.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 24 2017 2:55 PM Title: Twinkies Palace of Pain ~ 2
I like you started to incorporate the aspect of fear. The last two chapters were perfect!
Jeff could try to pull her panties a bit aside and then crawl inside. If he is lucky he gets on her clit :-)
I am curious if Twila somehow feeds her pets or leave them hungry ;-) At least she could let them clean her fingers. Also I am looking forward what happens when Melanie comes to collect Jeff.
Author's Response:
I like how you think, LT!
Date: July 24 2017 1:28 PM Title: Twinkies Palace of Pain ~ 2
Jeffrey pleasuring Ms. Kershaw. Cool. Love the way she holds them and squeezes them. Jeffrey is loving this. If he gets to Suzie will she be happy to see her little sweetie or not?
Author's Response:
Thank's D, ...you'll just have to wait and find out.