I like this type of foreplay. Also, what I liked about it, was how unpredictable it was. I kept guessing what would happen, and it was exciting to figure out what would Amy do.

Even as Amy was holding Tom and walking to the bathroom, my mind drifted to naughty thoughts as she walked in there.

Clever to have Tom be forced to hang on to her pubic hair so he wouldn't fall into the toilet water. It also lets her hands be free to anything that she pleases. Amy could freeely swing her hips forward and back and let Tom bounce on her pussy again and again.

I also like how you kept Jazzy out of this. I don't think Tom would be useful to satisfy Jazzy when he should be in full service to Amy.

In addition, I love how you mentioned that Maxine was gone and Jazzy went to sleep. It gives off a nice vibe that Amy is now all alone with Tom and we can only wonder what she will do to him.

I don't know why, but whenever I read about a giantess locking the door, with just her and her toy, it turns me on. It's that feeling that there is no escape and I think that's what Amy wants.

When Amy was describing her rules about Tom being a bug and his life is gone. There is one thing missing. She should have said that she will keep him forever and there is no where to hide, or soemthing like that. I would have loved Tom to just ponder that statement and think about being Amy's toy for the rest of his life.

That was hot, Amy trying to force Tom inside her and also get him to fuck her. If that was me, the words would be all I needed to explode into her. And yes, Amy, I would love to be your plaything.

I'm loving Amy right now and the juicy stuff is just getting started. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank's Tom. I had to stop writing for a few days and clear my head. This story has grown so much that I started to think that maybe I should, just go back to Billy's part and leave Tom, Jeffrey, and Dennis, to linger in the background until the end. Then, do three separate stories for each of you guys as 'spinoffs' ...haven't quite figured that out yet, I started thinking that maybe the story would drift too far between characters - (the scenes being separated so much) that the reader would forget what happened before...