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Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2017 3:37 PM Title: 'Squashed'

These last two chapters were very delicious.

I loved when Maxine said Tom is ok and encouraged Amy to sit on him again.

I am looking forward how his dream turns into reality - he will get probably more than he dreamed.



Author's Response:

Oh, yes.  He's in for it, now!  ;`)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2017 12:50 AM Title: 'Squashed'

Very cool.

Author's Response:

Thank's, Dee! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2017 5:45 PM Title: 'Squashed'

How odd. 3 of my favorite authors decide to post a chapter today. Well, looks like it's going to be a fun day.

Wait, so these last chapters never happened? It was all a dream? Funny part is that its sort of the type of dream that I would have too.

Since it's all a dream, it's kinda difficult to review the rest becuase what happened, didn't actually happen.

Let's talk about this dream then. It was hot. Classic ending was a death. Being surrounded by Amy's flesh seems intoxicating. Literally a wet dream, just a different type.

So, Tom pinched Amy's pussy and Amy goes berserk. Lol. I thought maybe Amy wouldn't feel much but I guess she felt it becuase of how sensitive her privates are.

Honestly, I forgot he was taped down this chapter. Another mention or two of his entrapment would have made the picture in my head more vivid.

Also, another part of me was hoping this wasn't a dream, so that way, a great transition could be his punishment which is to tie him up and put him in her panties.

In Tom's dream, he had an arm free. Well, I'm sure the reality is Tom bound up nice and tight. Amy has her experience with Billy to give herself ideas.

Well, since "nothing happened" to Tom, maybe we can get something real soon. Lol.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Haha, Yeah right, Sure Tom. So, you're saying that you didn't get into that? "*.*" Hell Man, I had to throw you a ringer, and when she really does rape him, it'll give him something to dream about - for real... 

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