Date: May 25 2017 12:29 PM Title: 'Angela's Surprise'
Here's what I think. Fabulous. From the beginning when Tom is finding out what life in a purse is like, and throughout this chapter, he learns a lot.
Loved his fear of Maxine and her hand. To see her gigantic face looking in at you is scary. To see her hand reaching in to get you is terrifying. How do you escape her fingers reaching for you?
Maxine's dialogue, is great, Don't be afraid little one. As if that helps. She talks to him like a small child or a baby bird that she just found.
This is one of my favorite chapters. I love his fear. Fear of the unknown and fear of being small. Humongous women that don't really care about your feelings or what you want.
Also loved how just raising her voice can bring him to his knees. They are like gods or more so Goddeses to little tom.
Really loved it,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thank's Dee! Yeh, I was a bit worried about that dialogue - It's not that it's so difficult, but - I really struggle to write - realistic - dialogue. I'm constantly asking myself, "Does it sound realistic?" and I go back and change it, and then go back and change it again, and again...
[Report This]Date: May 25 2017 8:45 AM Title: 'Angela's Surprise'
I like how the story continues. I think it was a great idea to create several tiny men and give them to various women. It opens so many possibilities :-)
I am looking forward seeing how they will be exploring their dominant site and turning their tiny males into slaves, servants and sex-toys :-)
Author's Response:
Yes, and thank's LickToy! I agree. Having just two characters in a story is much easier to flesh out. However, your perspective is then extremely limited to just those two people. With several things going on all at the same time, and different personalities interacting with some unknown victims; it allows the writer to skip around and go from gentle and loving, to cruel and uncaring or --sick and demented, (Ha!)...opening up the box and allowing Pandora to stretch her wings!
Maybe, ...or just simply creating different scenarios within the same story. I'm constantly thinking about and imagining these little GTS scenes, wherever I go, ...I could easily write a bunch of simple shorts, ..but, I'd much rather challenge myself and try to incorporate them all into a single tale.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2017 2:27 PM Title: 'Angela's Surprise'
This was the second longest chapter in this story. The chapter "punishment" was the longest. Also, yes. This chapter definately had the most dialogue in it.
You captured my exact thoughts as Thomas this chapter. I did not want to be a toy for Angela. After seeing her, I would love to be in Amy's hands instead.
Maxine really wanted to give Tom to Angela... but why? Especially when she promised Amy Tom instead. Any tiny person could help Angela. But only Tom could help Amy. Angela wants a little man, and Amy wants a sex toy she can fuck all day and night. I think since Tom is a crimal, he deserves to go to Amy. :)
Interesting to listen about Amy and Angela's porn interests. Angela likes femdom, and Amy loves giantess fun. Funny thing is, I enjoy watching both. Combine the two, and I instantly favorite the video. A giantess ties up a man to play with...you can't get any better than that.
For Angela, there are certain types of panties that have built in dildo's facing inward, so when you put the panties on, you also have the dildo go inside you and can relieve the stress she has.
Once again, I like the dialogue part. Now we just need a dirty dialogue chapter. Maybe not now, but when Amy thinks of her kinky ideas, I would love to hear her say this to Tom.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank's Tom, this next chapter is in progress, it's going to continue from where this one left off. I'm not yet, ready to jump away from this scene, quite so soon. It took alot of extra effort. (I really suck at writing dialogue) Although, I've got a rough outline started for the following setup -- which will be with Joyce and Diana arriving back and Maxine's appartment.
Next chapter, has some more surprise's, though,so get ready for the unexpected!!! ;`)
*How did you know how many words are the those chapters?*