Date: April 21 2017 1:39 PM Title: A Day at the Office
The writing is just excellent. I can't wait to see what Maxine does. Love her scientific thoughts on reducing people.
Amy is wonderful. He is just a means to her. Eventually he will be back with Maxine I assume.
Author's Response:
Well, I don't want to give it away, but - Billy might get a little break, (maybe) depends upon how you look at it. ;`)
[Report This]Date: April 20 2017 9:14 PM Title: A Day at the Office
Thomas Speedman! Lol! That's actually kinda funny. I wonder who this guy represents..... :D
Maxine is really focused on her next experiments. She already has clients for her experiment and is ready to shrink someone. I can't wait.
Billy still stuck with Amy. Loving it. I think Amy's perspective would be a nice touch to add too in this scene.
I was surprised how Amy was standing while keeping Billy trapped. I thought she had it under control where it wouldn't look suspicious. Now Maxine seems to have a very accurate picture od what's going on.
Wow, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Maxine is about to discover that something in her past is the driving force behind all of this...
...as for Mr. Speedman? I feel that his luck is about to change. He thinks that he's going away to prison and his life will be over, but - he'll soon wish that he would have been sent to prison... ;`)