Reviewer: Jbaron Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2016 3:31 PM Title: 'Bath Time - con't'

I am so looking forward for the next chapter : )

Merry christmas!

Reviewer: licktoy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2016 5:38 AM Title: 'Bath Time - con't'

I absolutely love this story and last chapters with Amy are my favorite.

 

I would like to point the following part out:

 

I looked up at her, trembling with fear, ...as her wide smile continued to grow larger, reflecting her intentions. She was completely infatuated with the idea of dominating me and if I showed any sign of resistance to her playful teasing, I was treated with an ever-increasing manner of imaginativeness. 

 

I love how Amy slowly unleashes her dominance. How she plays with Billy and laughs at him while he is trembling or struggling for her amusement and pleasure. I hope there will be more chapters with Amy. With plenty of her giggling and Billy's trembling. Maybe she could start to use him as her personal little servant too. Thanks for the grate story. P.S.: I love the level of detail in your stories.

 

Author's Response:

Thank's Licktoy.  Your opinion is much appreciated.  I really strive to infuse 'just enough' detail.  I like to slow it way down - so that you can almost 'feel' what's actually happening.  My first drafts are nearly twice as long, ...and after several proofreads, and a few re-writes, it gets trimmed way down... Lol!  

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2016 11:10 PM Title: 'Bath Time - con't'

Love the playful nesss and hope she gets naughty soon.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank's Tom.  I know that nothing much really happened, in this chapter, but how about that detail, ...I really put a bunch of effort into this one.  Rewrote it several times before I finally posted it.  I'm trying to use 'Thom Thumb' s style, and he really makes it look easy, but it's really quite difficult...