Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

While the chapter was sexy, I felt like certain parts weren't exactly clear like if Maxine was under the sheets? If Billly was in her hand at some points, was Billy being squashed in her boob or belly, if Maxine was awake or asleep? Just a few things here and there becuase it felt like I couldn't tell what is going on.

Now, you could answer that you wanted me to feel like Billy and I wasn't supposed to understand it all, but I think I prefer descriptions that describe something that I can visualize easily.

Yes, I would love Maxine more. So far, she knows what to do with Blilly. I love her moaning and talking at the same time. Especially about Billy being warm and cozy. That's the dirty talk that I like. Kinda naughty too. I like that.

I can't wait for the next chapter!