Date: October 01 2016 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love how Amy talks to him as if he were a child. How her raised voice hurts him. I am sure the doctor can do the same. Only on purpose. It is also cool when Amy calls him , little guy.
Later,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: September 28 2016 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bill makes a good point. The doctor does seem weirdly casual about the whole thing. Maybe she does know something about what's happening to him? Also, did you purposefully use two zeroes in the word stood instead of two o's?
Author's Response:
Yeh, I was purposely attempting to 'vertically' elongate the word, ST00D , in ST00D UP, but I later changed the rest of the sentence, in editing and forgot that I had done that, so it was just left that way, ...I'm surprised that you noticed it :)
I also have some other, different numbers - blended into a few of the following chapters... #3 #5
It's kind of a reminder, thing, that I use during the final editing stage.