Date: December 26 2015 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 19. Climax
Hmmm...
Dude, I'll be honest, I hardly read any sequences from Kelly's perspective because I knew at this point, (with her size and durability) there is no weapon powerful enough to kill her. It seems even a hundren megaton nuke would do no less then put her in a state where she became maybe ten miles tall.
You also proved that her new size even gave her new weapons. Using her urine to dispatch tanks was hilarious (Why were tanks summoned though?)
There has to be no more growth though. If you're story plays out the way I think it will [I'm not telling ;)] then teh excess growth at the end will actually have been a good plot-point. At her new size she was unable to hear the plane approach her until it was too late. If she was still only 2000ft or less the she would have seen it coming and destroyed with ease.
I realize now that will Kelly was recovering, Ron and the Major were mounting into their plane.Not the best explanation, but a reasonable one.
So, one more chapter. Which brings me to my big question:
Where did Joe hide Stella?
Author's Response:
Yes, one more chapter to go. Let's see if, by the end, things play out as you were expecting :)
I'll wait for your review next week. As for Joe and Stella... it will be resolved... or not ;P
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: December 26 2015 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 19. Climax
2 miles tall is too big! Hopefully this serum will shirnk her "down" to a more managable 1200ft tall or something. I think having her shrink down to normal would make me sad lol. Only a little left! Great story!
Author's Response:
I agree, 2 miles tall is too big. You already know that I like "more manageable" sizes, but it's fun to write about something out of my "comfort zone" for a while, as well. Everything will be resolved soon. I hope that you will like how. Thanks, as always, for the feedback!
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: December 26 2015 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 19. Climax
Great stuff! I'm excited for the next one, I'm guessing this story is almost over, but I hope you don't rush it, most stories on this site tend to have rushed endings.
Author's Response:
The story is almost over, as you say. Everything will be resolved next week. I hope it does not feel too rushed. I'm glad that you enjoyed this week's chapter.
Cheers!
Date: December 26 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 19. Climax
Looking at iHategiants review, I don't know if she is going to shrink this time. I mean she has to, the serum Ron used when he flew into her mouth with all of it. It should work, she should shrink down to her normal size right?
I can't believe she'll grow because if she does, its game over. For everyone involved. Kelly will be so large a simple twitch of her toes will cause catastrophic earthquakes across the world.
This should level it, leaving a normal Lisa, a somewhat dangerous but managable Casey and a very normal Kelly.
If she does grow, then its game over but I would love to see it. Kelly is my favourite character. The things that would hint at her growing is that one, she knows the feeling and Kelly has only grown so far so the sensation of pain is something known to her as she grows. Two, she doesn't want to grow. Any bigger and she'll wipe out the planet and herself since she can't support herself.
Looking forward to 2016 where I'll see the end of the story!
Author's Response:
Well, you'll know what happens soon enough. You are right: if she grows anymore, Kelly will be a walking natural disaster. She sort of is already. And she will be too big to be stopped. So, is this what's going to happen? Well, everything will be resolved in just one week :)
I hope that you enjoy the ending I have prepared for this story.
Cheers!