Date: December 21 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 18. Retribution
Let me think about your reasoning...
Nope, not buying it.
It just doesn't compute. Even though it was expected, it shouldn't have happened. The last thing this story needs is more growth. Any of that shit should have happened way back then. And I know you like to explain your reasoning and why you thought your method worked, but please don't. Not to me.
Just take this in and see if anyone else feels the same way. I just feel that you've seriously overvalued the formula's side effects as an excuse to make shit happen. At this point, nothing is rational anymore, not even in crazy-rational.
This chapter makes me want to travel back in time and repeatedly smash both Kelly and Casey's heads in before they ever get their hands on the formula... without even giving them the courtesy of explaining why I'm doing it. Doubtless you understand.
So again, no need to explain your reasoning. I just want this to be read and discussed by others.
Author's Response:
Ok, I will not explain my reasoning then.
While waiting for feedback and discussion from others you might want to notice that this is not a forum where everyone can answer to anyone's posts but a story site where you can post reviews and just the author can reply...
Cheers!
Date: December 19 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 18. Retribution
To me, it was obvious she was gonna get bigger. What is not too predictable right now is how they stop her. Also, the guy that invented this growth serum, I forgot his name, should be tried in a court of law in my opinion, his crazy human experiments are the reason this is even happening in the first place!
Author's Response:
Well, Kelly getting bigger was definitely a propable possibility. As for the way to stop her... brute force had already proven to be ineffective. The nuclear bomb was just the last attempt. The way to stop her (it it exists) will probably need to come from another source.
As for Ron... he was not trying to experiment on human beings in the first place. He was just a nerd that got too arrogant, but he was never bad. He is sorry enough for what is going on, and right now he is one of the only people that has some clue about how it could be possible to stop Kelly...
As usual, thanks for the feedback!
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: December 19 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 18. Retribution
Good that she got bigger instead of getting small or dying. She is Pissed (who wouldnt be after being nuked) and wants to show people she means business, interesting that the person on the pa was able to get through to her kind of. Can anything affect her now? Is she a true goddess? What about lisa? Good story addition. As always!
Author's Response:
The person on the PA managed to get through Kelly because she touched the "last fiber" of Kelly that could be touched. Worried as she was that she would not be able to interact with individual people anymore, the fact that a woman managed to do it touched Kelly's soft spot.
As for what can happen to her... there may be something or there may not be. Everything will be resolved in the coming two weeks.
I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter, by the way.
Cheers!