Date: December 12 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 17. Resistance
I gotta say... that was interesting. Once again though, way too many fighter jets wasted. Aside from that... Incredible.
Yet another development in Kelly's personality. Crushing civilians just to piss the military off... she's becoming more and more like Casey. Surely she realizes now that the only way she can win is destroy every single ship on this planet.
The fact that she got hurt is awesome. It proves that she is still mortal. And now the nuke. If it really peeled her skin off, she'll look like a monster.
I hope that killed her yet somehow I doubt it. Time and time again, we've been fooled by you (Papayoya) and here it certainly isn't 100% conclusive to what happened. [Though it's safe to say, none of the military made it out]
As for her growing... what if that causes her to explode? The formula might have some other side effects that we still don't know about. I mean, there's no way she can cheat death forever... right? -_-
Author's Response:
Well, I'm glad that you found it interesting :)
The fighter jets were meant only as a distraction, not as an effective means to fight her. Still, she dealt with quite a few, true. As for the civilians: she is not crushing them to piss the military off. She is crushing them out of anger after having been attacked. She's starting to feel that she needs to be harder to the population around her to show that she means business. And I think that, as you say, she is starting to realize that it won't be so easy and she will need to crush many more armies before she can prevail (if she can prevail, that is),
The fact that she got hurt was one of the important parts of this chapter, of course. She is still mortal. As for the effects of the nuke... it's not just her skin that was peeled of. If a conventional bomb could hurt her, you can imagine what several thermonuclear warheads can cause.
As usual I won't reveal what happened to Kelly or what will happen next. You can call it fooling... I prefer to call it "keeping the story unpredictable" :P
More details about what happened next week.
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: December 12 2015 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 17. Resistance
Great chapter! This is what I was waiting for, conflict! Not a one-sided slaugher. Things are getting interesting again, I'm giddy with excitement for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it. Finally the army managed to put some thought into a coordinated response to Kelly. Things are accelerating towards the end... I hope that you will enjoy next chapter too!
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: December 12 2015 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 17. Resistance
Oh boy! Is the nuke going to make her bigger?! She took out so many of the military and that nuke just took out the rest. Loved what she was doing to the military haha. Sad that we are getting closer to end, but the last couple chapters have been amazing!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you enjoyes these last two chapters. The story is getting to its end, but the ending will be intense :)
As for what will happen to her... well, as usual I won't advance anything. What is your bet?
Cheers!
Date: December 12 2015 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 17. Resistance
I hope Kelly grows to a size so large she dwarfs Everest. Just to throw everyone off.
Author's Response:
So, you're assuming she'll grow... ;P (to a pretty damn big suggested size, but the way...). Of course, something like that would throw people off, no doubt...
I hope you enjoyed the chapter. As usual, thanks for the feedback!
Cheers!