[Report This]Date: October 04 2015 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 7. Angel
So interesting seeing people react when they meet Lisa. Her intentions are verybgood, but the people are still terrified (although they are warming up). What happens when she finds Kelly? I was honestly expecting a Casey chapter here, but I'm glad we got this one.
Author's Response:
Well, I'm glad that you liked this chapter too. Next week it will be Kelly again, and the next one will be Casey's turn.
It's fun to write about how people react to Lisa and about how she takes those reactions. She is so different in this aspect to the other two girls! As for what happens when she finds Kelly? Well, you'll get it in full detail, but it will still be a few weeks I'm afraid. There are other things that need to happen first!
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: October 03 2015 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 7. Angel
I really, really like your writing. Since Vol. 1. It's more than just 'fanservice', as many stories over here that care little about writing, instead of making me want to stop reading or simply jump to the 'good parts' you make me truly enjoy the reading from the beginnig to the end. It's good, exciting and arousing.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
I'm glad that you are enjoying the stories beyond the pure fetish aspect of them. When I wrote them I tried to write a story that would be heavy in giantess content but that would be primarily a story, with its storyline, characters and flow. Comments like yours make me really happy, since it seems that I achieved my objective!
I hope that you will continue enjoying what you read. Please, keep letting me know what you think. Feedback like this is what keeps me writing and posting.
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: October 03 2015 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 7. Angel
You were right, I did love this chapter! Lisa really is an Angel in human flesh, like I said before I don't think too many people wouldn't be consumed by the power they have and become evil. Everything about this chapter showed her gentleness and kindness, she went out of her way, even putting aside her main goal to help people in need. She was so cute too, getting all flustered when people are afraid of her, that aspect of her character makes me squeeee inside.
Anyway, I'm glad we got the chapter, and I know you've said that Lisa is probably the character we get the least of which kinda sucks, but I hope we get a few more showcases of her gentleness along the way. Honestly she's the only person so far that I think the world would be better off if she stayed a giant. I can only think of how helpful she could be even when there aren't major threats like Casey or Kelly around. She could maybe be an architect or something, or maybe help firefighters.
Maybe if she wore shoes made with sponge at the bottom, she wouldn't cause street damage either, I'm sure the government or a company could find a way to allow her to enter towns without causing damage to streets. Anyway, these are just little ideas that popped into my head. Great chapter, and I eagerly await the next one!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I was sure you would.
I agree with you: Lisa is the only one of the girls that would be helpful to the world if she stayed giant. It's not as if she wants to. She really hates being giant. And that's probably the reason she acts as gently as she does. In her mind, she still wants to be a regular person, not someone with immense power over the rest of the population.
You will see more of Lisa and she will have a very important role in the story. But in a story like Side Effects a character like Lisa necessarily cannot get more "screen time" than the other two. In the end, it's Kelly who's driving the story with her actions and Casey who represents the added threat. Now that it's done, I realize that the story could have probably used a little bit more of Lisa, but probably more on the aspect of what her thoughts are. I'm afraid that if I had too many chapters focusing on how she helps people in similar situations to the ones in Cranston the story would get too repetitive.
In any case, don't worry: you'll see more of her and I think you will like it when you do :)
Cheers!
Date: October 03 2015 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 7. Angel
Good chapter, I think if only one could remain giant at the end of the story, I'd pick Lisa although Kelly seems to be far more interesting.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
If only one of them could stay giant by the end of the story, Lisa would definitely be humanity's safest bet. Kelly is way more complex, ambitious, has much less inhibitions and has her own agenda... I guess that makes her more interesting :) Now, seriously, Kelly is the character that helps moving the story forward. It would be impossible without her, her attitude and her intentions.
Cheers!