[Report This]Date: September 26 2015 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 6. Payback
Holy crap is Kelly crazy with power. Love it! I just wonder how much longer the military can fight her before they give up. Are u gonna go to Casey next week and Lisa the week after that? As much as I want to see what they are doing I'm fascinated by what's going on with Kelly. Awesome!
Author's Response:
Kelly is definitely drunk with power. As I mentioned in a previous review, she is just looking for ways to rationalize the use of that power. In this case, the fact that the Pentagon contains some of the people that ordered the attacks on her gives her an excuse to use her power without inhibitions, which in the end, even if she doesn't want to admit it yet, makes her feel good.
Next week's chapter is focused on Lisa. And then you'll get Kelly again. She is, by far, the character with the most "screen time" in this story. I believe you will enjoy a lot of the chapters that are coming.
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2015 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 6. Payback
Dont know what to say about this one, it was a massacre! I did like the little sections where you showed what was happening through the perspective of a normal person...It really cements the fact that these are real people not just fodder, and having them die because of carelessness or a direct attack at Kellys hands really makes me hate her more than I ever have. Id say if you want people to hate your villans keep doing this perspective shifting, before when it was just Kelly killing fodder I felt nothing but getting these little views from normal people just before they die really adds impact and gets the blood boiling. Im eager for thr next one keep it up!
Author's Response:
Yes, it really was a massacre. This chapter marks another step on Kelly's evolution. In her attempt to rationalize her own actions she first accepted that killing those that were attacking her was right, even when she was not at risk of being hurt. In the next step she accepted that due to her size fatal accidents would happen and that she could not prevent them all, so she should not feel guilty for them. And now she has gone and caused a real massacre which in her mind is justified because the Pentagon contained those that had ordered attacks on her.
The points of view from some of the little people had actually two objectives: on one hand to show a different perspective on the size difference and the consequences of Kelly's actions. On the other one, as you mention, to show that those in the Pentagon are real people, not just components of a uniform mass, and that many (most actually) of them have nothing to do at all with the attempts at attacking Kelly. Hence, showing these points of view was meant to help convey a little more how Kelly has changed and what is her impact in the world. I'm glad that you liked it.
BTW, I think you'll love next week's chapter :)
Cheers!
Date: September 26 2015 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 6. Payback
Brilliant stuff, Kelly accidentally crushing those people under oversized boobs! Easily the best character in this story and I really want to see her win this, who cares about Casey and Lisa?
She easily took out the Pentagon, tripping alone destroyed so much, keep it up!
Although you posted it right on top of my story grrrr.....
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I did not post right on top of Downtrodden on purpose :S
I'm glad that you liked the chapter. Volume 3 will have other action-based chapters like this one, but I think that this is one of the ones that came out best (you'll tell me by the end of the story...). It also explores a little more the quick evolution in Kelly's mentality.
Kelly is the character that is moving Volume 3 forward, definitely, but there will also be important moments for Casey and Lisa (next week, for example...). I guess that from my writing it can be noticed that I especially like Kelly as a character, in any case. But I hope that I'll be able to make you enjoy with the other two giantesses in the coming weeks, in any case.
Thanks again for commenting. I hope that you will continue enjoying the story.
Cheers!