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Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1. Starting Over

Kelly has gone a little (or a lot) crazy with power. Love it :)



Author's Response:

Well, I already commented a little bit about this in a review below. Kelly has definitely evolved with her new size, and not to be gentler. There will be plenty of chapters focused on Kelly and her antics at her new size in this story, so I believe that you will enjoy her.

Cheers!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1. Starting Over

Kelly has really gone overboard, I wonder how anyone is supposed to take her down? If it were up to me, id send in a couple of people into her ear and put a bomb in there. At this point Kelly is so big that attacking her internally is the only option. Anyway great chapter, to say im looking forward to updates on this story would be an understatement!



Author's Response:

Yes, she has. And I'm afraid that her size will get into her head into an even bigger way. She was already quite a megalomaniac... so now that she is way bigger and that she has been attacked at a much larger scale, her evolution won't be to a gentler person. Her character and behavior will still be very different to the one Casey would have had if she had been the one to grow to that size. Casey is a sadistic sociopath, Kelly is a megalomaniac with a sense of purpose.

Of course, at her new size, it will be much harder to take her down. This doesn't mean that people won't try, of course. Your suggestion makes sense, but I'm not sure if it is very easy to iplement. As long as Kelly is awake and moving, getting someone in her ear unnoticed will be almost impossible. And I think that while she is massive, her size is still not big enough so that this would be an easy to implement plan even when she is sleeping.... Anyway, next week's chapter will be the first Kelly focused chapter in the story. You will see a little more about her evolution and the way she thinks.

I'm glad you liked the beginning of the story. I hope that the rest will live up to your expectations. The draft of the complete story I have right now is 113K words, which is 30K words longer than Volume 2. So, there is Volume 3 for a while.

BTW, I believe Lisa is your favorite character. While she does not have the same screen time as Kelly or Casey, I believe there will be some chapters focused on her that you will enjoy.

Cheers!

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