Date: August 18 2015 8:28 AM Title: Tom's Story
I got to ask though, how do you update so quickly and not for this story but all of your stories? You're so prolific that it amazes me.
Author's Response:
Lol 20 words per minute stories come in bursts and then I just dole them out. Sometimes I go too fast and miss some things. Great reviewers help keep me on track, my thanks to them :)
[Report This]Date: August 09 2015 12:23 AM Title: Tom's Story
Poor Tom, if he listened his sister last night that would never happend.
If Karoline is kind enough, maybe she will let him get back to Tess :)
Author's Response:
Well shall see how poor Tom fares in the next few chapters...
Date: August 08 2015 1:05 PM Title: Tom's Story
Even though it is my request, I like to review it as if I dont know what to expect. I cant really explain it. It just seems more fun like that.
Also, my predictions when I say "I want to see" or "I hope to see" are like mini suggestions.
So far the story is beyond my expectations since I pictured it to be quite simple. However, by including many details and more characters and plot, the story feels more well rounded and on its way to a masterpiece!
This is probably that one story that when I say "I cant wait for the next chapter!", I really really cant wait. Im just that excited.
And as always, I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks alot Tom, i appreciate it, after all this was your orignial idea and I'm glad it has exceeded your expectations. :)
Date: August 08 2015 10:08 AM Title: Tom's Story
Guess Tom will be so over Janine by now!
Author's Response:
Torn between the danger and the satisfaction, almost like being married, oh wait, was that my outside voice?
Date: August 06 2015 9:00 PM Title: Tom's Story
Tom's grandfather suffered the same fate, does that mean the process is irreversible? If so, then Tess better run over to Janine's place immediately! Tom needs saving.
Author's Response:
Will be looking into the grandfather stuff but only on the periphery. the well gets deeper.
[Report This]Date: July 31 2015 12:44 AM Title: Tom's Story
I love the relation between Tom and his sister. She help him to realise his fantasy and really care for him. I hope she ll get back him soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking time to write a review. I'm still not sure where I want the relationship between Tess and Tom to go but we'll see.
Date: July 31 2015 12:33 AM Title: Tom's Story
Wow, deep stuff from Janine but Tess is going to get caught up now that she can't find Tom. How Janine will react to seeing shrunken Tom will be fun.
Date: July 29 2015 6:53 PM Title: Tom's Story
Soon Tom will be discovered and all sorts of sexy things will happen! :)
Author's Response:
Soon :)
Date: July 23 2015 7:50 PM Title: Tom's Story
When he goes to that party , I imagine he will wind up with Janine or one of her less stable friends.
Date: July 22 2015 8:00 PM Title: Tom's Story
So it starts, Tess' engorged nipple the indication she is enjoying having her shrunken brother so small and within her boobs.
Author's Response:
The physiological responses are predicated by her autonomic nervous system, it's her cognitive battle that is the one to watch
[Report This]Date: July 21 2015 9:36 AM Title: Tom's Story
I've heard of mandatory silent reading. But, mandatory silent eating??? How stuffy can a boarding school get?
Author's Response:
An old Rodney Dangerfield bit, "The school i went to was tough, oh it was tough, after the football team sacked the quarterback, they went after his family." That's a tyough school. :)
Date: July 20 2015 10:47 PM Title: Tom's Story
Every time the shrunken guy is found by his kid sister I wonder if the author will make the sister into some horny or vengeful sibling. I dont get this yet so it is refreshing although Tess couldn't resist taking a shot at him.
Good stuff , very well written scenes!
[Report This]Date: July 17 2015 8:51 PM Title: Tom's Story
Is this story what I think it is? If yes, thank you!