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Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 6:56 PM Title: Tom's Story

Easily this is hands down my favorite story going on the site since you seem to be done with The Book, which I was really into. Admittedly I'm not as into it with the Mom as I'm not as attracted to older women but it is still great.I do hope for three things in the future. One, I do want to see Janine get him back and see what she'd do. Two, I'd love to see a good foot worship chapter, though that doesn't seem to be much your thing so I wouldn't be upset if it isn't included. And three, my most desired thing is a legitimate anal insertion chapter, as that is my favorite thing period, and you've teased if a few times. I'd rather that be with Janine, or even his sister, but would still love to see it with the mother if that's your plan, just want to see that become a large focus, him fully shoved up there



Author's Response:

Hi Cameron99, while i am not done with the book, I am certainly at an impasse, I am in the process of ripping it apart and putting it back together, minus the Harald thread and the awakening of Freya. Anal insertion may be coming sooner than later (I just included it in my story Fan girls, and there was an episode of an overnight stay in Double Dog Dare) - thing is, in this story, it probably wont be with either Lina or Janine (well not the first time) :-O

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 3:59 PM Title: Tom's Story

@carycomic, Oh you meant something sexual was going to happen in this chapter.

Nevermind about the cat fight thought.

Author's Response:

Lol

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 3:56 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Carycomic, anything but talk?

I thought for sure at least a discussion, argument, or debate would happen.

I didn't expect like a cat fight if that's what you mean.

I discarded any thought about a physical fight because this is a mother/daughter situation.

Well that's what I thought at the end of chapter 24.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 1:56 PM Title: Tom's Story

Oh Janine, now you know what it is like to have something forcefully taken from you. 



Author's Response:

Just fuel to keep her motivated sort of an okay let's regroup and refocus to capture the prize. We shall see

Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2015 10:32 AM Title: Tom's Story

Thanks a lot,like a loot!
I can wait man but please dont forget it at the end,i really like your stories.

Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 7:24 AM Title: Tom's Story

Hello,

Very nice stories with detailed descriptions and emotions which i like to see a lot along with teenage bratty girls terms.

I know many people enjoy your stories already and i feel like im gonna get flamed to death cuz of feet hate but would you mind writing a long story filled with cruel teenage girls,stinky cheesey,feet,enslavement,converse/sneakers,toejam etc...Some people like me in here like nasty stuff on this website,i tried to write my own story but ended up failing cuz my main language isnt english.I hope you take dont turn down my request and write a foot oriented story.Please man,your writing is just brilliant,i wish i could spin events like you could do.

Thank you,

Lolwat111-



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Although not my cup of tea  I will see if I can't come up with a story with those parameters but please bear in mind it will take some time before i put anything out as I currently have several 'active' stories on the go and all I ask is for some patience as I bring some of those to resolution. 

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 5:05 AM Title: Tom's Story

This is nice, I always like the gentle giantess.  If you want Tom to sleep with his giantess then I recomend the story Close on this sight the last 2 chapters.  It is just more intement in my opinion.  Let me know if he is going to do this sort of thing with his sister because it is kind of implied in it.  This is just recomended have fun writing your story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review. The original request for this story came from TomSpeedy who asked for the daughter to be like Janine and the mother to be gentle. I think I would prefer gentle well most of the time :)

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 5:05 AM Title: Tom's Story

This is nice, I always like the gentle giantess.  If you want Tom to sleep with his giantess then I recomend the story Close on this sight the last 2 chapters.  It is just more intement in my opinion.  Let me know if he is going to do this sort of thing with his sister because it is kind of implied in it.  This is just recomended have fun writing your story.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 2:24 AM Title: Tom's Story

After so much shit, finally Tom gets his break with Lina. 



Author's Response:

And then makes it sexual... he has both the libido and wisdom of a teenager :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 12:47 AM Title: Tom's Story

Am I the only reviewer rooting for Karolina to keep Tom? Everyone seems to want Janine, Sam or Tess. No love for Karolina.

I think everyone loves those characters a lot but they haven't seen much of Karolina to like her compared to the girls. I think after these next few chapters, hopefully Karolina does things to Tom that will make everyone root for her.

Duggernaut, your writing is too good that every character you write about gets some love from everyone.

Now I'm putting my faith in Karolina to be the star character, so I can't wait to see what she has in store.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the praise Tom there are several incredibly talented writers on this site who's stories help me elevate my own.

Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 12:40 AM Title: Tom's Story

Okay.. First of all, I want you to excuse me if I make grammatical mistakes, because I am French :)

I just wanted to add a new review to your awesome story.

I've read it all in only two days, I swear it was so interesting !! I swallowed it, litterally ! I enjoyed it so much.

You've got to know that usually I'm not fond of mean/violent stuff, and I'm more about feet that anything else, but... Wow ! Even if your story didn't contain I like most, you succeeded in make me love everything about it ! The shrinking is quick to happen, and the way his sister acts with him... This really gets me crazy you know... *~*
The interactions with Janine are really interesting considering the direction of the story, but I have got to admit that I only wait one thing, it is that his sister gets him back :3 I know she seems to like more and more strange things about him, but I hope she won't lose her mind and stay careful with him.
Lina seems lonely in her life, and I'm affraid she will maybe just want to keep the little guy for herself, and this isn't a good thing at all :S Plus Tess's friend, Sam, seems also very interested in the little guy.
Added to what their grandfather told them via email, I'm wondering if the device not only shrinks the subject, but makes him also absolutely irresistible ! This is true, look at it this way : All the girls who've been in contact with the "andsome little guy" seem to fall under his charm... Really strange...

Anyway, even if my review is short, I just want to let you know that I'm really enjoying so much !! Your work is awesome, and the universe you created is completely wonderful... I'm just waiting so much the reunion of the sister and the brother... *~*

P.S.: I saw that the story has been last updated yesterday, amazing !! I hope you'll continue to add more chapters, really your work is magnificient.. Thank you for sharing it with us :3

I'm in love with Tess.

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read this story and share your praise. Not sure yet how or if Tom and Tess will be reunited but we will see :)

Reviewer: Northgate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2015 6:23 PM Title: Tom's Story

Just wanted to jump in and add my contuned support for the author.  Simply put great story.  Please continue.  I love it.

Now I also want to comment on the specifics of the story at this point although now that I read previous comments I see I'm not the only one on many of these points.  I guess great minds think alike or maybe it's small minds!

It kills me that Tom can't learn a lesson from his time with Janine.  He meets Karolina and instead of playing the pity card, he tells her he watched her naked and that she looks like a Godess.  What is he thinking?!?

I see this going three ways, all which are good.  1. Fun and games with Karolina - maybe gentle or maybe mother like daughter.  Maybe she'll design a necklace that will actually work.  2. She reunites Tom back with his sister but then we will have the curious Sam who we all know can't wait to get her hands on little Tom.  3. Karolina gives Tom back to Janine.  This one gets my vote!  After all Karolina is the overindulgent mom who got a mainstream rock band to play at her daughter's birthday party.  She isn't going to deny Janine her favorite little plaything.  All three choices are good and I can't wait to see where this goes next. 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your continued support. Tom is still young and blinded by his libido which means pussy. You make some astute observations and your ideas all have potential but let's us not discount another possibility - the existence of Marta the housekeeper she may yet play a more significant role...maybe :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2015 12:25 PM Title: Tom's Story

Congrats on reaching 100 reviews on a story!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom it is due to a fair number of people taking the time to support the story (your story my words) and share a review yourself incised thanks to everyone!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 9:26 PM Title: Tom's Story

Awww, Karolina and Tom sitting in a tree! 



Author's Response:

Um yeah its about to take a turn seeing as she is the tree :P

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 8:18 PM Title: Tom's Story

Just caught up on last two chapters, love that Janine! Great scene with the hairbrush. So want her to keep Tom to herself, hope she can snatch him away before Karolina gets out of the showwer, Janines been rough on Tom when shes not even angry with him, would love to see wht she does to him while mad *weg*



Author's Response:

Twists and turns, but we'll see where our little hero winds up - hopefully he doesn't get stepped on :-O

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2015 9:12 PM Title: Tom's Story

That review took so long that it timed out, and I had to login again and copy and paste it back.

Long reviews are a good sign. It means that it was a great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks tom, glad I still have your attention and am still following the path you set down

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2015 7:03 PM Title: Tom's Story

Tom bought himself time , at least until Karolina finds him or she leaves the room. 



Author's Response:

For now...

Reviewer: Northgate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2015 8:50 PM Title: Tom's Story

I waited a while to review but after the last chapter I couldn't wait any lomger.  I love the idea of Tom getting everything he wanted but it didn't quite turn out the way he thought it would.  Great stoytelling so far.  Janine is a twitsed bitch  and I can't' wait to see what she has planned for him next.  Please keep going.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

I appreciate the read and review thanks for taking the time. Janine certainly is developing an appetite unfortunately for Tom or formate I guess depending on perspective. Next chapter steps it up some hope you enjoy! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2015 5:06 PM Title: Tom's Story

There are writers that update a story once a week. There are writers who update a story every other day. Then you have people like Duggernaut who update 6 stories every other day.

There should be a top ten for most consistent updating authors or something.

Author's Response:

I didn't realize my updates were out of the ordinary. I could slow down...just messing

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2015 11:27 AM Title: Tom's Story

Yeah, I was wondering the same thing as @Nostory's review below me. How are you so fast at updating. Every 1-2 days there's a nw chapter out! How?!



Author's Response:

Red Bull just kidding just trying to share my stories and hope people enjoys. :)

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