[Report This]Date: June 24 2015 1:20 PM Title: Finishing the Commercial
I love this so far. Just a suggestion but this last part should all be a trick thought up by Maria so she can get Dianne as a permenent toy/slave. Not to try and dictate your story mind you. I just really like when girls are using other girls no matter the size or fetish. I just think it wold be great if the dress was designed to be able to be worn inside out as well of coarse lisa assumes Dianne is taken out when inverted, but is "accidently worn anyway" and Maria were allowed to keep the dress and "accidently wears Dianne home"... wink wink nudge nudge;) whether you use my idea or not this is still really good. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Well I had something in mind that was kind of similar. I do like your idea though :)
Date: June 21 2015 9:03 PM Title: Finishing the Commercial
Butt action is not my thing, but having Dianne "sewn" or attached to the clothes is the right choice. Accessories are meant to be seen and not heard. Personally, I would have preferred Dianne being "plastered" to Maria's boob or dominated by her nipple.
Author's Response:
Hmm. That's a good idea for later on!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2015 2:53 AM Title: Finishing the Commercial
God, I love Maria
Author's Response:
I do too :D