Reviews For Moonlit Nightmare
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Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 Moonlight

The camp setting is a great original way to tell this fantastic giantess vore story. I'm hanging to see what happens in chapter 2.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 Moonlight

I suggest breaking down the text more and to use more dialogue. Dialogue helps us to get to know the characters in addition to the descriptions you provide outside of it. 

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