[Report This]Date: February 07 2015 5:54 PM Title: Carbon Footprint
A damn good chapter. The two main characters' interactions are really cute. I'm surprised you didn't go further into the lewd with them. While the environmental business is a tad hamfisted, you've created a really cute giant car 'enthusiast'.
I'm also surprised you didn't promote this in the threads right away, they've been surprisingly tame the past few days.
Author's Response:
Thank you! That's pretty fair. I probably could've lewded it up a bit more. My intention was to have the sexy bits kept until near the end to build tension, but to keep it *somewhat* realistic. Don't know if that really worked out. At the very least, I'm glad you liked the interactions - I was a bit worried about that.
I haven't been in the threads for a bit, actually. Fixing that now. Again, thanks!