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Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 25: Truth and Hope

I worded my last review terribly. I didn't want to spoil anything but there are many hints to another truth in the recordings.. Especially with Henry Martin and a "Couple that used to work in the CDC". Along with the details of the terrorist attack that killed Henry Martin and orphaned a child. I can only hope sanders catches on to all that. Then perhaps Aviel can be convinced she is fighting for the wrong side.

Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 25: Truth and Hope

The "BIG" truth is revealed. Also, if certain other parts of those recordings are implying what I think they are... Something about modern weapons... Then Aviel Is more.. Miss guided for lack of a better term.. Than I thought she already was.

Author's Response:

>.>

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 25: Truth and Hope

Whoa.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 25: Truth and Hope

Despite having no GTS in it this chapter was really good! Seeing the slow progression of change with Manchent and Henry over the course of several video logs was really well executed, I give you props there! Now what will the resistance do with this information? Ooooh, the suspence is driving me nuts!



Author's Response:

Well there was some, just dream GTS. Glad you liked the logs, I was rather proud of them myself. And you won't have to wait too long.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 25: Truth and Hope

And the big reveal...is something we were introduced to ages ago. With some new information, about the pipe. I want to see how they react to it, and what else is on there first, then Samantha and William. After that, Aviel and Fionne would be nice too.



Author's Response:

Well its a big reveal to the characters and while I could have keep it a secret, anyone who played the game would know it so I figured everyone should be on the same playing field.

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 25: Truth and Hope

Wow that was an epic reveal.

Personally I want to see how everyone reacts to the truth but I also want to know what Aviel and Fionne is up to. 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, and Aviel and Flonne weren't even a choice! Oh fine...

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