[Report This]Date: October 03 2014 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 24: Fury of the Present, Curse of the Past
At the risk of sounding like a broken record (vinyl forerunner of the compact disc), you continue to amaze me with your plausible depictions of each character's emotional make-up. The fight between Jacob and Gerard, for instance. I loved it! As realistic as it was exciting.
Realistic, because if Jacob is in danger of becoming another Jason, then Gerard is more than halfway to becoming another Darius. And, that is most undeniably a _bad_ thing! For as I pointed out in an earlier review. Total abandonment of one's ideals during a war is inadvisable, as it risks turning one into one of those monsters of Nietzchean philosophy (i.e., worse than those one fights).
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it and I don't mind for you to keep saying you like it.
It is a possiblity that we are seeing the cycle start all over again.
[Report This]Date: October 02 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 24: Fury of the Present, Curse of the Past
Jacob is the new Jason, it seems. Let's see if Jacob meets the same fate, or if he changes in time to survive.
It's also good to get a bit more info on Darius' sister, and well done on the rest of the chapter.
Author's Response:
It seems that way and we can only hope. Perhaps Samantha will save him from that fate...if she is alive to do that anyway.
I want to do more on her, but its hard to without just sidelining the entire story. Thanks either way.
Date: October 01 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 24: Fury of the Present, Curse of the Past
This chapter was hard to read too. The nasty bleakness that encompassed this chapter just made it a slog to read through...Not that its a bad thing but I need to read a cheesy love gts love story to ease myself.
Author's Response:
It was supposed to be rather depressing and horrid. I wish I could say the next chapter is better but...well we are in the shit now and things won't be looking up for awhile.