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Reviewer: DuffyBear Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2014 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

Really enjoying it so far. I would've loved it if you had expanded the 'monster mommy,' I just felt the chapter lacked a bit of punch. Nonetheless, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

It did. The idea was to have one last view into what Dean's home life was like before continuing the plot.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 16

More like a teaser of a teaser becuase that was really short.

Did u just watch Godzilla, cuz I was wondering if that's what made you use that term to describe his mother. Haha.

So in this chapter, mom picks him up, tells him he will be sleeping with her and then he ends getting breasted. Cool part about short chapters is how you remember more of it.

Anyway, I hope soon is bit quicker time. I can't wait for the next chapter!

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