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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 23: Sacrifice and Legacies

I see nothing wrong with double-spaces between paragraphs and/or character dialogue. Or, with the rest of this tantalizing chapter, in general.

Finally! We're getting to the solution of the mystery.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 23: Sacrifice and Legacies

This is one of the best stories on this site. Your willingness to do bad things to characters makes Samantha's situation that much tenser.

And soon a key piece of backstory will be revealed. Can't wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks and yes I have no regards offing people if I feel its warrented.

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 23: Sacrifice and Legacies

Well if there was anything that would make Isabella do what she did it would be learning the truth beyond the shrink incident. If that is the truth Madysen's is talking about then it will be interesting what Darius does with it and if it will really change anything. 



Author's Response:

It will indeed.

 

As for changing things...well knowing and having proof that the Society caused the shrink disaster and the deaths of billions of people...not exactly something the Society would want to get out.

 

Doubly so considering people in the Society seem to be unaware of that.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 23: Sacrifice and Legacies

Holy shit. And the hype begins! Im soo excited for the next chapter!

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