[Report This]Date: September 02 2014 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Pieces Arrive
A Society _convoy_ headed toward Lindale, within two or three days of Gabby's fortuitious reunion with Sanders? As S.Z. Sakall might say:
"I smell a rat in Denmark."
[Report This]Date: August 29 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Pieces Arrive
This chapter was amazing! It had a bit of everything: romance with Gabby and Jimmy, Fanservice (Gab's toned ass), humour with Pyrra's shannanigans, and even tension at the very end. Crazy how much you manage to cram into every chapter!
And Pyrra blowing Gabbys ears out was the highlight of this chapter for me. Pyrra can travel long distances with no rest, put up with being hungry for decent stretches of time, but if you fuck with her beauty sleep, oh ho ho...prepare yourself XD.
Great chapter and I cant wait to see how shit will go down next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks, and yeah it was long but I couldn't stop stuffing shit in.
It was partilly the sleep, both mostly cause Gabby nearly blew her ears out by yelling right into it. I said it was like an air horn going off in your ear for a reason.
And shit will go down. But for who?
Date: August 29 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Pieces Arrive
Hmm...quite literally the calm before the storm. I'm steeling myself for the deaths to come.
Pyrrah's growing awareness is also something very cool to see.
Author's Response:
I can neither confirm or deny that people will die. All I can say is shit's about to get real.
I will admit, I was tempted to not even do this whole thing, but changed my mind. Glad I did now that I am doing it.