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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2014 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 19: Cracking Alliance

You continue to press all the right emo-buttons. That is; the debate (behind Sanders' back) covered all the pros and cons that might plausibly arise during a real war-time conference. As far as Gabby's lying, though? It was probably more of a half-truth. And, here's why I think so.

Gabby's first assumption, about the interview, was some kind of initiation by gang-rape. Which makes me surmise that she _was_ found by a scouting party of Elves (probably after the same thing the Phoenixes are). And, seeing her under-dressed,...?

Well, let's just say that her threat to the Phoenixes had probably already been carried out in fact. ;-)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 19: Cracking Alliance

The way Gabby made it seem it was like the Phoenixes don't have a chance in the world getting inside the place let alone finding what Manchent left behind! Not to mention the fact that the group is holding itself together by a thread!

If I've ever seen impossible odds, this would be them! I can already see the deaths on the horizon...Anyway, it kinda sucks that THIS is when Pyrra decided to speak since their is no time to flesh it out more.

I'm really excited for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Just FYI, they were talking about the base in New Atlanta, not Lindale. Lindale is way over near Rome and that is where Manchent left whatever he left.

 

Anyway, thanks for the kind words and such.

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