[Report This]Date: July 21 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 18: Old Friends, New Circumstances
Pyrrha can talk, now??? WHOA!!!!
Seriously, though: this installment had everything I like. Action; suspense; a brilliant plot twist (Gabby's back? You go, girl!); and even a shade of philosophical gray that most people all too often ignore.
Namely; that "trust" and "faith" are not one and the same. The latter might be offered blindly (if not unconditionally). But, the former has to be earned before its given...just like respect.*
*Which, btw, is similarly _not_ synonymous with courtesy! And, that's what parents are truly demanding from their teenage children on those occasions when the latter are rude to them.
Author's Response:
Indeed she can, and she is hungry.
Glad you liked it and yeah I was going for that grey area of stuff.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 18: Old Friends, New Circumstances
*reads the last bit* AAAAAAHHHHH!!!
Good work on the story. You make good use of multiple close third person, the characters have great depth, and you describe a good action scene.
And good move bringing Gabriella back. She's a great character, and Samantha's girl crush was fun to read about. It seems that Samantha always needs a woman to idolize.
Author's Response:
heheheh.
Thanks, I take pride in my action scenes, what I think I do best.
Yeah we needed a new resident badass and Samantha needed a new role model. Let's just hope Samantha doesn't put her on too high a pedestal.
Date: July 19 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 18: Old Friends, New Circumstances
I don't have a good feeling regarding the survivabiltiy of Gabriella even though it was awesome to see her again.
And oh man Pyrrha being able to talk will lead to all kinds of things.
Author's Response:
Aww, you make Gabby sad. She is so awesome, how could I kill her? Oh right, easily and without remorse.
And yes Pyrrha starting to speak is going to make for some very interesting things to come.