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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 16 2014 11:21 PM Title: 4

Seems like a good storyline. If you add longer chapters, than the quick short chapter. You may have a more successful story than you think. Plus you can still put plenty of cliffhangers in a longer chapter. So Don't worry about that.

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