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Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 15: Hope

I kind of hope that what Sanders did doesn’t backfire. It would be interesting if Sanders becomes so popular that he actually becomes a problem to Darius if the people start favoring Sanders over him. As for the chapter itself? It was good but the reference to the game was lost on me as I never played it. 

 



Author's Response:

The reference was really just a name drop so you didn't miss much.

 

And that would be interesting and might create a power fight between Darius and Sanders. Whether that will happen or not we will have to see.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 15: Hope

It's way more than a few who are homeless, Darius. And, while I agree that the big picture is way less fuzzy from the lower ranks, the fact remains that not "speaking of this again" won't prevent the conversation from recurring from someone else's lips. Just as inevitably as death and taxes!

Author's Response:

It won't but Darius still doesn't want to hear it. He views himself as just barely keeping the Phoenixes alive and any distractions, people or not, could get them all killed. Not saying he is right by any means, but he is not totally wrong either.

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