Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2014 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 14: Rekindling Hope

I'm sorry but I can't get the image of Pyrrha with a cannon on her back out of my head now. Pyrrah Tank must become a reality! 

Otherwise, excellent chapter. 

Author's Response:

Well the Phoenixes do have those three handgun cannons. Would take them a good while, but they could probably fit one to her. Course they would have to find another full sized gun that worked, first. But maybe Pyrrha will become their "mobile fortress".

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 14: Rekindling Hope

This is my favorite chapter in a while! I love the downtime, and Pyrra really stole this chapter for me...That mama cat thing with the little kids was so adorable! And somewhere in the back of my mind I picture the horrible things Pyrra would have done to those SAME kids had she still been with the Society.

Though, now I'm wondering if Pyrra is beginning to instrinsically learn what "right" and "wrong" is. If Sanders commanded her to kill the kids and Samantha, would she do it without question?

Great chapter, this is a favorite of mine for sure! These kinds of chapters really add depth and color to the universe you created while also putting powerful characters into "normal" everyday situations which is something I'm a huge fan of.

 

Author's Response:

Well...less horrible things and more horrible thing...ie eating them. Cause that is what she would have done. And maybe she is starting to learn some morality, or maybe Sanders is just rubbing off on her. And, honestly, she probably would.

 

Thanks, and yeah I like throwing Pyrrha or Flonne or whoever into situations that are generally normal stuff, yet complicated by their size.