Date: June 07 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 13: Symmetical Past, Divergent Presents
A lot of character development in this chapter, I liked it a lot. Now we know why Jacob isn’t a good solider. I really don’t know how I feel about this guy anymore. He can never be in a position of leadership. If Tiffany knew what he did, she’d probably straight up kill him.
I also like the development of Pyrrha and you do a good job emoting her even though she can’t talk.
Author's Response:
Oh Tiffany would kill him in a heartbeat if she heard about it, no questions asked. Do in front of Derek too if needed. Jacob is supposed to be a rather complex character who makes for a hard person to full fault, yet cause problems.
I will admit, I didn't think writing for Pyrrha would be as fun as she is turning out to be. She might replace Gabby as my favorite character to write.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2014 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 13: Symmetical Past, Divergent Presents
I liked the chapter, it was a nice change of pace to get some character development without people dying left and right. Basically I'm happy for the bit of calm we got although knowing you, it could be gone in an instant!
Anyway, I also noticed that Samantha and Pyrra are becoming good friends. I think its really funny how Pyrra seems to understand what everyone's talking about and even throws in her 2 cents (with meows of course), into the conversations.
Good stuff!
Author's Response:
You are right to suspect that. If I feel its needed, calm will be smashed apart faster than you can say GIANTESS.
Those two do seem to be getting close really quick like. Kinda ironic that Sanders and Jacob don't get along but their two "girls" so to speak, are. And I actually enjoy the hell out of writing for Pyrrha. Its actally really fun to write her talking without actually talking.
Thanks.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2014 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 13: Symmetical Past, Divergent Presents
With all due respect to Samantha, sometimes boys HAVE to be boys. Because, once testosterone comes to a full boil, it will _not_ simmer down on voice command alone. And, that's the sad-but-true fact, Jack!