Fantastic Story!

I just read leverage and this story, and this story is by far better in my opinion.

Im glad you made that comment on your chapter end notes that there will be more than Sandy and Abby. Unlike most writers, Im a fan of MILF, and I prefer the MILF to be non-blood related to the protagonist.

So in this case, While everyone is hoping for Abby, Im want to see Abby's mom.

Also, as a side note: It would be helpful to rename your chapters. It will be eaiser to remember what part of the story happens in which chapter.

Your setting of the scene was interesting. A guy living with his hot, young mother, and notices a hot girl move in next door. Then when Sandy uses the syringes to shrink Adam was a good scene. Personally, i just wished it wasnt his mother but another MILF.

In addition, if Sandy was a rude mom, or if Adam was an annoying kid, then Sandy never had to feel sorry for sexually dominating him. Just thought I would point that put.

With the lack of reviews,I believe its the lack of Abby, which most reviewers here are wiating for. Perhaps you could involve a tease for the audience where Abby rings the doorbell, and gives Sandy a gift while Adam is watching from Sandy's bra. or something similar.

I like the change of body parts. Feet, boobs, ass, I like it. But not as much as your creativity. Your creativity was great. I love the themes of bondage, and when a tiny is trapped awaiting thier giantess. The scenes of Adam stuck on the bed, stuck on the chair, were a thriller to me. Another good scene was when Adam held onto Sandy's panties; good unaware moment.

As for suggestions, my direction of the story would be Sandy greeting the new neighbors while hiding Adam with her. Then Sandy meets Abby's mom and decides to trap Adam with Abby's mom. Sandy could ask to go to the restroom, but she actually sneaks into Abby's mom's room, and ties Adam to her bed, her panties, her bra, her heels, or all of the above,you name it! As for your other reviewers, you could later have Adam escape Abby's mom and Adam gets trapped by Abby. But the main part of my suggestion is to get to Abby's mom.

Forgive me for the long review, I just had a lot to talk about since I read all 5 chapters at once.

I cant wait to read the next one!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I didn't want to rush straight into Abby which I know a lot of readers are waiting for rather build it up instead. I have read novels where I have been yearning for a particular character and they haven't appeared so I can understand the frustration. However, with regard to your thorough review, I have thought of utilising many of the ideas you have suggested so don't worry. In spite of that, as a note to everyone reading this story, be patient; exciting times are just around the corner.