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Date: April 06 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
Author's Response: Danged, if that weren't a knee-slapper. X-D





Date: April 06 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
Dang, that Malarkey Johnson, sure is one long-winded Yankee! Wonder if-en, he ever took a little snort a-somthun er nuther?
I reckon so... heh,heh,heh
Author's Response: Danged, if that weren't a knee-slapper. X-D
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Date: April 06 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
Author's Response: Only if he were a silicon-based member of the LSH.





Date: April 06 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
Sorry, my pun obcessed mind (which you can relate to) just thought of "the Sand blast kid."
Author's Response: Only if he were a silicon-based member of the LSH.
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Date: April 06 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
Author's Response: Thanks. The brevity was initially a necessity, as my previous pc kept auto-timing out after one thousand words! Now, it's just personal preference.





Date: April 06 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
Poor Red Bear. He’s apparently never met Becky before.
Strange how the more I read your style of writing, the more I start to develop an odd appreciation for it. The short chapters are a nice change of pace.
Author's Response: Thanks. The brevity was initially a necessity, as my previous pc kept auto-timing out after one thousand words! Now, it's just personal preference.