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Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 3: Lena's Gift

Interesting development...

And as for the new characters, I like them. It's good to see resistance members not painted as the bad guys, even if some of the members used to be criminals. 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: Lena's Gift

Good chapter. I like seeing just how Sanders escaped. Now, though, I'm curious about who that woman is, how she got that way, and what becomes of her after this.



Author's Response:

We will learn more about Lena and how she wound up where she is, though its going to be awhile before we get back to her.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: Lena's Gift

Ah! A long-lost Resistance member who puts the ESP in "espionage." No wonder the Society has her on ice!

Brilliant. :-)

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: Lena's Gift

Liking the new characters now, not sure I would have been had Sanders not returned though. The developments this chapters have me intrigued. Also with the reveal of how Sanders escaped, I'm still not sure what to think of Aviel. 

Initially I thought it was all a plan to save his life, no longer sure of that, but not 100% sure about her betrayal either. Guess we'll see down the road.

Now the question is will Darius believe any of this?

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