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Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 2: In Vain

Disheartening chapter with a nice surprise at the end, I can’t help but feel the phoenixes are underestimating the society.

Nice to see Sander’s again, but I wonder if he’ll be the same Sander’s we all know since he’s supposedly been living on his own for a year. I wonder if that collarless cat girl was the same one to escaped at the end of act one.

 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2: In Vain

It's pretty clear that the Resistance (at least this group) isn't a bunch of heroes themselves, though they're still not as bad as the Society. The Phoenixes are coldly pragmatic whereas the Society is properly evil. Also, it's good to see Sanders back. It would be good to see how he got here.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 2: In Vain

Ah! A new recruit...and not just any recruit, either. Excellent tie-in!!

:-D

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: In Vain

Well he's alive! Granted he could be in far better shape. No telling what he's been through to get this far.

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