[Report This]Date: January 15 2019 3:32 AM Title: Prologue
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Date: January 29 2015 9:13 PM Title: Prologue
When are you going to start Act 3.. The suspense is killing me!
Author's Response:
Just did.
Date: December 30 2014 11:24 AM Title: Prologue
Can I just spout a theory? What if aviel saved sanders purposefully by placing him in a cage she knew pyrha was in? Oh, and I feel honored to have been called a cupcake by you, mister author sir. I haven't enjoyed a story like this since that whole titan shindig, thank you.
Author's Response:
You are welcome, cupcake. It is a theory that has merits, though her extreme rage and pretty obvious intent to kill seems to suggest otherwise.
Date: December 29 2014 1:50 PM Title: Prologue
Somethings been holding me back from reading the last chapters of this Arc. I think it's probably fear that characters are gonna be killed off, I know you're no stranger to killing off characters! I'm probably gonna hold off till tommorrow to marathon the chapters I have left, I just don't have the stomach yet...I'll come back with a review once I catch up!
Author's Response:
Wimp.
Date: December 07 2014 12:37 PM Title: Prologue
don't get why Sanders wanted pyarr to go to pick up Jimmy and co before coming back to save soldiers hidden in the rubble. those were closer to pyarr. can someone help if i misread due my basic english, please?
Author's Response:
Because they had the computer with Manchent's plan on it. Without that, the plan the group made after learning the truth would fall apart. Put simply, they were more important and needed to be saved ASAP lest it fall into Aviel's hands
Date: October 11 2014 4:46 PM Title: Prologue
This is easily my favorite story on this site. I appreciate the the time you have obviously put into it. I have one question though. And it may be totally unimportant and irrelevant. But in chapter 6 Pyrrha was badly wounded in that fight against the giantess while sanders and herself were escaping. Then it seemed they were discovered after the fight and sanders contemplated using nanobots to help her get moving. Then in a later chapter in hope sanders recalled not using the nanobots on Pyrrha. So how did she get the strength to escape when society personnel were pursuing them after the fight?
Author's Response:
Glad to her. As for your question, I have been meaning to go back an explain that but never got a chance.
Sanders had Pyrrha eat some of the giantess to get back enough strength to get moving. He didn't like it, but at the same time he figured the giantess deserved it so it didn't really bother him too much. With her strength partily regained, they managed to get into the ruins of the city proper and slip away.
Date: October 01 2014 4:59 PM Title: Prologue
Nice.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: August 05 2014 7:15 PM Title: Prologue
OH doh!
I thought they were talking about Lindale. I've always had a problem with all the terms and names being thrown around in this story. Anyway I'm sure Lindale isn't gonna be a cakewalk either, so I'm still excited!
Date: August 03 2014 9:52 PM Title: Prologue
One more time, I´m sorry.
Gracias por tu respuesta, y por tomarte el tiempo de traducir todo la "charada" que escribi (charada, en mi país, no mi lengua (español latino), sino mi país, significa; o al menos eso creo, este tipo de lenguaje es más callejero que normal, y, con la suerte de haber nacido en clase media baja, (en mi país, las clases sociales se dividen en tres secciones, y, al mismo tiempo esas secciones se dividen en tres subsecciones y este tipo de clase se considera afortunada, poco probable y milagrosa, casi un tiro de suerte, la mayoria solo alcanza la clase baja media, la que se considera el cepillo pobre que que rosa el cuero cabelludo de la miseria) conozco poco sobre expresiones de este tipo; demasiadas palabras inecesarias en el contexto del tema), y, para no alargarme demasiado (si es que en este punto aun puedo decir eso), espero que todo lo dicho anteriormente, en mi anterior comentario, obvio, no altere tu forma de escribir, o, al menos, no de forma negativa.
Me despido, y no te preocupes por mi que yo seguire aquí esperando, con ansias pero paciente, la coclusión del acto dos, y posiblemente la continuación en el acto 3 (con "posiblemente" me refiero a que posiblemente habra un acto 3, no que posiblemente lo leere, estoy seguro que leere cualquier cosa... no, me corigo, cualquier historia que estes dispuesto a publicar ("cosa" puede estar abierta a varias interpretaciones y estoy completamente seguro de que no me interesaria leer tu lista del super), aunque, esto me lleva a mi siguiente, y, ahora si, un poco vergonsosa, pregunta; considerando lo del idioma, la traducción y el tiempo invertido para hacerlo, etc. ¿De qué tratara tu siguiente historia?. Al final de... tu primera publicación (esta algo complejo, para mi, escribir el titulo en ingles y google lo traduce de manera extraña, pero con "primera publicación" estoy seguro que sabes a cual me refiero (me refiero al acto 1)) hay una pequeña historia y , segun tú, se trata de tu proximo proyecto. No debes sentirte obligado a decirmelo, tú tendras tus razones para no hacerlo y yo lo entendere, aunque, si me dieras tus razones las entenderia mejor) de la misma manera que una madre, amorosa y entusiasta, espera el nacimiento de su hijo, la espera es tortuosa pero el sacrificio vale la pena, así que, relax (en mi país, "relax" es una forma más exotica de decir "relajate", aunque signifique lo mismo en tu idioma (curioso, no)).
Ahora, para no alargarme tanto (esta vez si es enserio, I´m sorry), solo dire, Thank you. :)
PS: Lamento lo del idioma, la mayor parte de mi vida en la que he invertido en este sitio, he tenido que traducir todo lo que leo en google y entiendo que algunas palabras no tienen una traducción legible en el contexto, la proxima vez, tratare de usar palabra que tengan traducciones concretas en el traductor y procuraré ir directo al grano y no llevarme demasiado tiempo en mis comentarios. No es algo que controle, simplemente, cuando comienzo a escribir algo, nunca me fijo en que dirreción van mis palabras. Lo siento.
If you read this part without having skipped all the rest, thanks for taking the time to translated everthing, I leave this part translated (with google translator, obviously).
Author's Response:
I tried doing that monstergirl growing project along with After Shrink and it was just too much to keep up with. I will probably go do it when I either need a break from this or I finish it. Whichever comes first.
Date: August 01 2014 9:42 PM Title: Prologue
I´m sorry but I needed write this in spanish to express myself better.
Voy a ser sincero contigo, de hecho voy a llegar a ser lo más sincero que puede ser con alguien, tomando en cuenta que ese alguien esta a cientos de kilometros de mi, puedes darte una idea de lo sincero que puedo llegar a ser.
Soy un gran fan de esta historia (tu historia, si es importante, para ti, señalar esto), no dire que el fan número uno (estoy seguro que habra personas que serian más dignas en llevar ese titulo que yo), pero aun asi un fan y tengo una pregunta que me lleva consumiendo toda mi atención desde que termine de leer la primera parte de esta gran... !NO¡, DE ESTA !ESPECTACULAR¡ obra maestra (puede que este exagerando esta parte, me refiero a lo de mi atención, para mi esta es una historia asombrosa).
¿Cuantó tiempo falta para terminar este acto?
Ahora, quiero explicarme para no crear malos entendidos y creas que estoy exigiendo una escritura más rapida y publicación constante, o estoy atacando tu forma de escribir. No, nada de eso. Pregunto esto porque yo veo una historia (y creo que todo lector debería verla, de forma diferente, pero con el mismo metodo) como un buen vino.
Cuando tienes una botella (el autor, tú) lleno de ese elixir tan estimulador (una idea, una historia) te gusta servirte una copa, y ahi diferentes formas de degustarlo; unos prefieren ingerirlo en pequeños sorbos (capítulo por capítulo), disfrutando de cada gota bailando en la lengua y deslizandose por la garganta; otros prefieren tomarlo de un solo trago (en un solo acto), sin darse el gusto de siquiera de saborearlo; pero hay algo que todos tienen en comun y es el tenerlo a la mano, para poder gozarlo de la forma que uno quiere sin la necesidad de esperar a que alguien lo sirva, sin tener un limite para poder consumir hasta la ultima gota con el ritmo que uno quiera, un día, una semana... un mes.
Me gusta tu serie, pero prefiero seguir esperando hasta el final del acto dos para poder seguir disfrutandola sin restricciones; sin tener que esperar hasta el siguiente capitulo, como lo hice con el primer acto, pero para ser sincero (oh si, aquí empieza la sinceridad), con la falta de material fetichista en aquel día, comence a leerla sin tener la más minima idea a lo que me abstenia cuando la página mostró que ya habia finalizado y con el mismo entuciasmo que un chico preparandose para la escuela el viernes, mientras más rapido empiecen las clases, más rapido esta volviendo a su casa; pero la trama, el concepto y los personajes me han mantenido enganchado hasta ahora.
Por esto es que me veo en la penosa necesidad (bueno, un poco más de sinceridad, para mi no es una pena, solo trato de ser formal y, en cierto sentido, amable) de pedirle esta información, que teniendo en cuenta el contrato no escrito que existe entre el escritor y el lector (considerando que usted considere esto algo real y con peso) creo tener derecho a conocer (otra vez retomando lo dicho, solo es una pregunta hecha para satisfacer la curiosidad de un lector constante, no se trata de una forma de crítica desanletadora o una forma de ataque hacia tu persona).
Espero tu respuesta con la paciencia que un oso espera el verano, y considerando los meses que llevo esperando, creo que es la comparación más asertada.
Thank you! :)
Author's Response:
If google translated all that right, you want to know how long till Act 2 is finished. Honestly, I can't say. I can say we are not even at the mid way point so its probably going to be a few more months.
And thanks for all the kind words and don't worry about insulting me or anything. I fully understand the want to just read it all rather than have to wait.
Date: July 21 2014 8:24 PM Title: Prologue
Well its up to you whether you wanna change the synopsis or not but its really easy to accidentally ruin the plot of act I in just a quick glance!
Date: July 21 2014 3:33 AM Title: Prologue
Even though this could be about the one hundredth story I've read on this site, it is the one only so far that urged me to register an account to say:
THANKS! THANKS FOR WRITING THIS!
I love your storytelling, how pieces add up together to a larger picture, how the characters develop and how you, despite all the science fiction, manage to keep it real and lively.
I'm desparately looking forward to the inevitable confrontation between Aviel and Sanders, and I hope she will find herself in almost the exact same position Lutice has once been in, towering above him while he's down on the ground at her full mercy.
I hope Aviel realizes what she has done, and, regrets it. After all, she is a character one was able to symphatize with, and despite her urge to take revenge, had a noble goal.
Can't wait to see how the story continues, please, do NEVER abandon this story until it is finished! It is far too good to be left in the open like that.
Personal Request: I hope one day you write a (bonus?) chapter in which we can see the growth and first giantess experiences of Aviel in her own perspective, being able to read her thoughts during it. I would love it.
Author's Response:
well, you are welcome.
Thanks, I try to keep things futuristic, but still in the realm of believable.
Hehe, I can say that Aviel and Sanders will meet again. As for having that kind of scene...we will have to wait and see.
Maybe she will, maybe she has gone full on evil and turned her back on everything for her revenge. We haven't seen much of her in Act 2 so its hard to say. Though she did try to kill Sanders in Act 1.
I don't plan on it unless something crazy happens.
Once Act 2 is done, I figured I would hold a poll somewhere where you guys, being the readers, could decide if we just move on to Act 3 or go back and see the events of Act 2 from Flonne's perspective. Persoanlly, I would like the latter as there are some important stuff that happens that Sanders and co never see, but Flonne does.
Date: July 19 2014 9:10 PM Title: Prologue
Also, this is something I've been meaning to say for a while now but keep forgetting...Change the summary for this story! Seriously you ruin like the most impactful plot twist for Act I right from the get go (the Isabella death thing)!
Author's Response:
NO!
If you can't be bothered not to look at Act 2 before reading Act 1, you deserve to have things spoiled. People need to learn some selfcontrol.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2014 12:40 PM Title: Prologue
Holy shit, this chapter was amazing! We got a nerve racking encounter with a feral catmonster, the re-reveal of Gabby who is such a badass! And dat ending, oh mah gawd dat ending!!!
You sir, are playing with my emotions!
Author's Response:
Thanks.
And good, that is what I am going for.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2014 1:51 AM Title: Prologue
Quite a bit of world building in this chapter. Lot's of info on different characters and their backstory's...And surprisingly, no immediate consequences to Sander's actions! I'm eager for the next one!
Date: June 21 2014 12:29 PM Title: Prologue
Somehow I can already see the deed Sanders did backfiring and getting someone killed...
Author's Response:
He has to catch a break at somepoint, right?
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 5:54 PM Title: Prologue
Awesome way to tie this story to last. Id say by this point there shouldn't be doubt as to whether or not Aviel is corrupted. She betrayed them, and maybe their wasnt any doubt in her mind when she first joined their ranks as to what sacrifices shed have to make to attain power.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Aviel has been rather clear she was all about getting her revenge.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2014 9:17 PM Title: Prologue
You already know how fanboy I am about your stories...
I loved the battle scene, it was descriptive and well thought out. Pyrra seems to be getting funnier and more likable with each chapter, and she is really becoming a great character in her own right! That bit where she chanted along with mews along with the crew was cute and hilarious! And Sanders is also developing as a three dimensional character.
My only complaint so far is the lack of distinct resistance personalities...I dont know none of them have "caught on" with me yet except Lindsay and you killed her off already...Maybe some down-time would help, you know: no immediate threat, some Pyrra/resistance member interractions would be fun, maybe some kinkyness with her and Sanders?
It would also liven the mood a bit, this story is depressing as fuck sometimes...its greatest strength for sure but it wouldnt hurt to soften the blow a little with some lightheartedness.
Just some suggestions...
Author's Response:
Yeah I have noticed that too. However things have been moving too fast and generally been too hectic to get any real characterizations in of many of the Resistance guys. Thankfully, though, things are going to calm down now and guess what next chapter is all about?
[Report This]Date: May 02 2014 6:09 PM Title: Prologue
And so the deaths begin...Shame about Lindsay, she's the resistance member I liked most. But man if she can't turn any situation in her favor! Even her own death was exploited by her to enrage Sanders! And did Pyrra show sadness for Lindsay at the end there or was it that Sanders mood that affected her?
Great chapter, depressing (but that's this story's tone in general), but a really good chapter that not only moved the plot forward but had some Sanders character development too!
Author's Response:
Indeed she can. I actually didn't plan on offing her so early, but it felt right. As for Pyrrha...maybe....
Date: April 25 2014 2:44 PM Title: Prologue
I loved this chapter! And I absolutely love Pyrra too, its kind of cute how she seems to "talk" without using words. But I kind of wish it could talk. Oh well, at least it's smart enough not to kill everything that's not Sanders.
Author's Response:
Indeed, I am enjoying writting her "talking" as well. Its a bit different and a nice change of pace.