Date: May 13 2014 7:58 PM Title: The Dream
In addition, if you are interested in creating another story alongside this one, I suggest starting a story with a random guy who somehow gets shrunk and is seeking help. He wanders into a house with a girl and a mom. Then you could add all these sexy MILF and teen girl scenes without having any incest.
Or, if you are just focusing on this story, then you can make Abby and her mother as the main giantesses. I can think of Abby's mom as a hot mom, but Adam's hot mom just feels awkward.
Anyway, its just a suggestion. I cant wait for what might be my favorite character and that is Abby's mom!
Date: May 05 2014 2:42 PM Title: The Dream
I think the mother going on a power trip is less farfetched than her son being shrunken. I mean, IRL there are abusive parents, sexually, physically, emotionally, whatever.
It's okay to get a little crazy with it sometimes. These stories are about X happening. What would it feel like -if- you shrank and -if- your mother turned into this sexually charged giantess who no longer saw her saw as a person but as a toy or less.
Of course, I'm sure we don't think of our own mothers when we read these things. We're thinking of pretty women. :D
Anyways, enjoying the read.
Author's Response: I think we share the same view and I agree with you. Furthermore, these stories are purely figments of my imagination and I like to explore all sorts of diverse aspects. I thought my other story Leverage was more far fetched than this. Anyways glad you're enjoying it.
Date: February 15 2014 8:03 PM Title: The Dream
Imagine how disturbed he is now to realize how fast his mom was so fast to...you know...;) MY WHOLE LIFE WAS A LIE! Poor dude. lol. interesting start tho.
Author's Response:
Haha I guess that's one interpretation, although you could read it as purely the excitement of having such power. Thanks.
Date: February 13 2014 11:45 PM Title: The Dream
I like where this story is going, I'm a decent fan of good incest.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're on board, enjoy it while it lasts...
Date: February 13 2014 2:24 PM Title: The Dream
But...but...ITS HIS MOTHER!.....................Kill her with fire........
Author's Response:
Haha hey it's not that bad!
[Report This]Date: February 13 2014 12:10 AM Title: The Dream
I can see that this story has much potential. I hope you continue it and turn it into a fully fledged adventure =)
Author's Response:
As can I. Hopefully this story will run for a very long time.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2014 8:02 PM Title: The Dream
Extremely well developed, the scene is definitely set! I like the set up too. His mother being much younger than most, and the new neighbours moving in just at the right time...
The larger blocks of text is a little hard to work through. If you could break it up just abit it would be much easier on the eyes. Although, other than that, I have no other critic's...
Looking forward to the following chapters of this story. It seems like you've really got a handle on where your going with it, and I can already tell that it's going to go into my favorites.
Thanks for posting it! I'm on board! ;)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! I felt that the age of his mother was important as I have seldom read mother's being as young as Sandy is. Ah I'm sorry about that, I find that if you set the text size on 5 it is much easier to read.
You're more than welcome and I'm very pleased you're enjoying it as much as I am. Stay tuned for further updates.
Date: February 12 2014 2:57 PM Title: The Dream
I think this is a good start but I still need more to make a descision as to a score for this.
Author's Response:
No worries, completely understandable, hopefully Chapter II will whet your appetite.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2014 1:58 PM Title: The Dream
Intriguing opener! Welcome to the club.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! I hope to continue with this and update it more frequently than that of Leverage.