[Report This]Date: December 13 2013 10:06 PM Title: Ch. 9
Things are starting to get interesting. Who knew Sandra would have so much lust for power. It seem like last chapter she was nice but playful, now she drunk and psycho.
Can't wait for more and I'm glad you update frequently.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad your getting into it. I sometimes wonder if it's 'Interesting'- Enough...so I try and have 'something' different within each additional chapter. Might be considered a bit overwhelming at times but you certainly can't say it's 'boring', Ha! Stay with me, I've got an perfect ending worked out for this, but I could go in most any direction working my way toward that big finish...I want to spread it out for several more chapters though, so it's nowhere near the end.
[Report This]Date: December 13 2013 9:08 PM Title: Ch. 9
I'll say "R.I.P., Bob." Because, I don't think he's going to be able to hold his breath long enough to survive to chapter 10. :-(
Author's Response:
Oh, NO, Bob doesn't need to hold his breath, don't worry,...he'll survive. Sandra doesn't want to hurt her little hostage, now doe's she?
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: December 13 2013 4:05 PM Title: Ch. 9
I was expecting Diane to end up with her miniature son in law, but maybe Sandra the land lady will be alot more fun!
Great story, Dude. I hope this has more than 12 chapters, you could easily carry this out for alot more... I hope! ;`)'''
Author's Response:
Thanks Cat! Diane might get her chance, a little later in the experience. I might just go on for several more chapters with this second part, or maybe a 'Part Three', I've not decided yet... but, this is going to last a lot longer, so just saying, Bob's experience is gonna be his Ultimate!