Date: May 27 2017 10:29 AM Title: Ch. 5
Very much loving the fear of the hunt. Great story.
Date: December 09 2013 3:14 PM Title: Ch. 5
OMG ! But this story is just great ! I 'm a French and i like your stories ! Please, add the next chapter quickly ! What's gonna happen to Bob ? And Diane ? Did she find him ? Please, add more !
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Glad your interested in this, like to hear more from you too... :)
[Report This]Date: December 09 2013 12:30 PM Title: Ch. 5
Actually, the word is spelled "enthralled." Other than that, I have no complaints. Your cliff-hanger was suitably suspenseful. ;-)
Author's Response:
Thanks Carycomic, I miss a stroke occasionally, and don't catch little things like that. I refuse to use 'spellcheck', as I'm continually trying to improve my spelling. So, I just free write and edit two or three times, before I submit the chapter, but- it's pretty hard to catch them all, unless I feeel giddy and purposely plant a misspelled word like that, just to see if your paying attention...
Pretty K-gnarly huh? :)
[Report This]Date: December 09 2013 12:01 PM Title: Ch. 5
I'm still reading and look forward to your next chapter. Guess I was right when I said that Bob would distrust his wife now that he knows that she was in on the plan. Anyway the longer you can prevent her from getting him and the worse shape he's in when he's finally found, the more guilty she'll feel and treat him well.
Author's Response:
I don't want to give anything away, but your pretty well on track....
Thanks for the review!