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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2017 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

Great start. I like Carly. You write very well. Looking forward to this. I remember watching a female neighbor of mine slowly step on a bug in her house once. Very memorable.
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2013 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

Hmmmmmm! It appears we have two sets of still water running deep. And, chapter three will no doubt be their confluence. ;-)

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