Reviews For A Little Affair
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 10 2022 5:19 AM Title: Chapter Ten: Reformatory Prison (3)

Lesbian twin sister, then*


*Speaking of often over-used tropes.



Author's Response: Lesbian twin sisters? Where did that come from? This story doesn't have any characters who are of that sexual orientation. 

Reviewer: Theodous Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2018 3:47 PM Title: Chapter Ten: Reformatory Prison (3)

Wow, it's very rare that I find a story of this caliber on this website. Or any sizeplay page for that matter. The level of detail that was put into describing not only the enviroments, but effects that things had on Adam. Made it very easy to put yoursel fin his shoes. And to see things through his eyes. To feel the emotional termoil that he and any other would surely feel, if they were to be suddenly thrust into such a terrible situation.

 

The way that Riley viewed the whole thing, is what made it all so truly haunting. Because in her mind, she wasn't doing any of it to hurt Adam. Rather than help him. And there's simply no way to talk to someone like that.

Pretty darn amazing story from a literary standpoint. I really hope that there is more in the work. Because this is such a rough cliff hanger. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2015 9:39 AM Title: Chapter Ten: Reformatory Prison (3)

Another good story bites the dust.

:-(

Reviewer: ColdAtlas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter Ten: Reformatory Prison (3)

I bet Riley is going to look like the "Lesser of the two evils" after experiencing life with whoever took him away.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter Ten: Reformatory Prison (3)

Now, please, don't get me wrong. I'm indescribably happy that you're posting again! Life's not the same since Littlefan Productions bit the economic dust. But, with all due respect; didn't you already use the fickle giant girlfriend angle for the conclusion of SORENTOPIA?

Author's Response:

It's not a girlfriend or any type of love interest whatsoever. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter Ten: Reformatory Prison (3)

Let me guess: she's found herself aGoth-punk boyfriend. And, new flame will extinguish old one (literally) underfoot.

Oh, dude! I thought you were _so_ more innovative than that. :-(

Author's Response:

not even close my friend.



Author's Response:

not even close my friend.

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