Reviewer: oishi1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 5:32 PM Title: Meeting Keira

"Thankfully there wasn't much left of the day, and the entire building was empty in roughly an hour. Always the last one out, Lauren was careful that she didn't intentionally hurt, or break anything belonging to or made up of her employees."

that made me laugh pretty hard.

 

"Watching Lauren abuse the power she'd been granted, both physically and financially was the sort of thing he loved to watch." there's got to be a better way to word that.

this chapter is a great turning point. I like the feeling of surprise she gets when she meets the model. btw if he was cheating, he'd be having more sex with her instead of less.