Reviews For Broken Sky
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Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

This is an excellent story! Its well made and has a lot of potential. count me in for any future additions to this series. Also are you planning on making a godzilla style showdown in one of the cities between Aria and Mae?

 

The only criticism I can think of is that there is a lot of big ideas presented here and that can potentially backfire.



Author's Response:

I plan do something like a Godzilla showdown, yes. But I'll think about it for a long time though. There are indeed a lot of big ideas presented, the main reason why I'm pausing with this because I don't want to rush it, but for most of them I've already got a resolution, just have to think how to fit this all in.

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