Reviews For Broken Sky
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Reviewer: Raiza Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 01 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loving this series.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you do. Would be great if I got some criticism for this, it's my first story but I don't mind people marking out mistakes.

Reviewer: ChompChomp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 11

This chapter was beautiful. Just beautiful.... I'm really enjoying your writing style...

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it so much.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 11

I am saddened to see this story end it really was quite a ride. anyways I really like what you did with this character I hope you make her revolution suceed perhaps have her go one an intergalactic killing spree against those who took over earth.

Look foward to reading more from you.



Author's Response:

The story isn't really ending here, it's just that I'm done with Broken Sky itself, the story about the end of a civilization. I'll explain myself a lot more on the end notes in the next, and last chapter.

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