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Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2013 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 3'z

The story started off really great.  I loved the what did she do to her ex boyfriend.  I took it as a she shrunk him or somthing.  Obviously whatever she did wasn't that big a deal as he wasn't scared of her or anything at the party.  That was a real downpoint for me, I would of prefered a more sadistic break up, not a pathetic one. 

At first I didn't care for the chapter length.  I prefer a few paragrahs over the one or two.  But you fixed that after chapter 2.

Obviously they seem to treally love each other but I'm not to crazy over gentle giantesses.   I'd prefer situations where he's not to crazy over whats happening to him.  Either she gets caried away or someone else gets him.  Maybe even have some misunderstaning between them.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 29 2013 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 3'z

Good story.

Just stop apologizing and provide a brief description of each chapter.

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 3'z

Shrinkage, at last! And, it's nicely refreshing to have the beautiful giantess be a gentle one, right from the start.

:-)

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2013 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 7 3'z

Good good, just some improvements here and there. All I suggest majorly is for you to make the dialogue sound a bit more 'loud'. I mean make the characters really speak out.

But I like the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

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