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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 Strange Dream

That's SOME dream! :-)

Author's Response:

Sure is and thank you for reading

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 2 Strange Dream

Things are getting weird, and don't worry, your writing will improve the more you write. I really can't understand the fascination with Call Of Duty. I know it's just a minor detail, but it's all people seem to use their Xboxes for these days.



Author's Response:

Ok ill keep that in mind

 

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 2 Strange Dream

Ok, I'm gonna tell you something I tell a lot of new authors that do this. Slow Down! Don't upload so many chapters per day. Give it some time to sink in with readers. I used to upload like this, but it's better to just wait.

I really like the story and other than some grammar errors, not bad, not bad at all.



Author's Response:

Thank you

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