Date: November 13 2013 11:47 AM Title: An End of Sorts
O_O
Date: February 08 2013 10:20 PM Title: An End of Sorts
Sad ending but great story not how I imaged it to end
Author's Response:
To be truthful, me neither at first. I had a sequel in mind, but then I just thought of this. Seemed good to me, and so, he died.
Hope you will stick with me in the future in some of my other stories.
[Report This]Date: February 08 2013 10:07 AM Title: An End of Sorts
Cool story. But was confusing towards the end when Melissa thought he was a bug.. I mean was it just the fact that he was small or was it really a bug and this whole thing was one big dream? At any rate, great story an loved the gentle scenes as well as the foot stuff.
aaron
PS will there be more 'family matters' ?
Author's Response:
She thought he was a bug because he was small. The End.
Also, there will be more. A lot more. But I'm really busy these days and can't find time to write. But it will continue. Eventually...
[Report This]Date: February 06 2013 10:08 AM Title: An End of Sorts
A truly bittersweet ending. And, yet, oddly amusing, too! Perhaps because it gave new meaning to the phrase "schoolgirl crush." Oh, well! ;-)
Author's Response:
Ay, that's the term I thought of too. Glad you enjoyed the story.
And on another note, I have a story idea I think you especially might enjoy.
Date: February 06 2013 5:32 AM Title: An End of Sorts
So sad...I have nothing else to say.
Author's Response:
My attempt at a twist ending.
[Report This]Date: February 05 2013 9:28 PM Title: An End of Sorts
Melissa stomps poor Lee's guts out! Without even recognizing that he wasn't a bug! Man, that really chaps the the cheeks! I wanted to see Alex introduce her lil' guy to Melissa, and see her surprized reaction. Oh, well, at least she did get to see him for a second or two.....
Author's Response:
My original ending was that they were going to meet. Then happily ever after. But I was in a bit of a dark mood and wanted to end it the way I did.