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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2013 2:06 PM Title: Deep

I read all four chapters in one sitting. That's how riveting they were. Well done! :-)

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2013 8:17 AM Title: Deep

Things escalated kind of quickly. Maybe a bit too fast. Not that I'm complaining.

A much better chapter Defright.



Author's Response: To tell you the truth it is very hard to please the people who want a real story and the people who read for other reasons(no further comments about why else they are reading). Sorry I know my writing crude but I hope the longer I keep this going the better I will get.

Reviewer: Ghostbuster5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2013 4:25 AM Title: Deep

Dear Defright,

I am about ready to go out and find that shrinking liquid. Semicolon capital p (*snicker* I make myself laugh. Now I only have to make OTHERS laugh!) But then again, shrinking is VERY dangerous. Then AGAIN, giant toes. ... Hook me up!

Pleased (Not sewually. Get your mind out of the gutters.) reader,

Ghostbuster5



Author's Response: Making you happy makes me happy! Writing is better then reading!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2013 3:16 AM Title: Deep

Some of the paragraphs are too big, otherwsise you're doing ok. I don't actually like insertion but given their friendship it was inevitable. Just split up the larger paragraphs to be more managable and you should be fine.

Author's Response: I knew I should have done that but I could never find the right point.

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