Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2007 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

This story demonstrates best why you are the best of the best. You do such a good job weaving in plot with entertainment. 

You do perhaps the best job of writing good stories first and foremost. Which in this community is a rarity. So often we see stories that lean so heavily towards the fetish side of things you can hardly find a plot. 

I definately am looking forward to seeing the rest this story and the conclusion to the scenes from a transforming world. I was also happy that scott chelgren made an appearance.

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words.  There are other good writers out there, though, who actually know from plot.  NFalc springs to mind, of course, and you're not so bad a writer yourself.  ;)